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Arthur Jones, often called the “grandfather of bodybuilding,” was a real game-changer. He was one of the first to champion minimalist lifting, and he invented some seriously innovative exercise machines. Ever heard of Nautilus? That was him! The machines were known for their adjustable resistance, perfectly matching how your strength naturally changes throughout an exercise.
Jones coached some huge names, like Mike Mentzer and Casey Viator. He was also famous for his own experiments, like the wild “Colorado Experiment.” Basically, he became the guy for single-set, all-out muscle building.
While people remember Mentzer and Viator, Jones was the “exercise philosopher” who shook things up. Back when marathon workouts were the norm, he went against the grain, advocating for intensity over volume. His logic? “If you train correctly, you don’t need a ton of exercise. In fact, you can’t handle much exercise if you’re really pushing yourself!”
He believed in training smarter and harder. As he put it, “All the evidence points to maximizing exercise intensity and minimizing the amount of exercise to just what’s needed for growth.”
Jones wasn’t kidding around, either. “It’s practically impossible for a conditioned athlete to overtrain in terms of intensity,” he’d say, “but it’s super easy to overtrain in terms of volume.” So, ditch the idea of slacking off just because his methods were minimal.
There’s some awesome vintage footage from a 1987 workout with Boyer Coe. Jones is schooling Coe, a bodybuilding legend who competed with the likes of Arnold Schwarzenegger, with his meticulous coaching style. Coe racked up countless titles and magazine covers.
The video gives you a peek into how the elite trained back then, with Jones guiding his athletes to championship form using single sets pushed to failure. It’s raw, pure ’80s bodybuilding, without any of the flashy clickbait we see today.
The Workout:
The workout starts with calf raises with 300 lbs. Jones reminds Coe they are revisiting the workout. “I faulted you on the form here, so let’s see if you can improve the form a little bit today,” he says and asks for a kick at the top of the calf raise. With his direction, Coe manages to slightly increase the range of motion at the top of the movement. Jones explains they’ll take the weight up in the following session after lowering reps. Coe ends up doing 17 reps.
Jones insists on the control of the rep. “Don’t stop at the bottom and give me a definite pause. You don’t have to stay up here any great length of time, but show me that you can”.
He explains that, “Sometimes I’m looking at the weight stack, I can judge your form better from the weight stack than by looking here. If you kick it at the top, this weight stack will bounce; if it goes up and pauses and then goes back down, the form is good.” After Coe delivers eight solid reps under control with a pause at the top, Jones says they’ll stick with the weight until Coe can get to 10 with a good form.
Leg Curl – 180lbs
Jones recommends not to let the weight stack bounce, encouraging control through the rep. “This knee was bothering me a little bit,” admits Coe. Jones tells him “You had your knee too far down, I believe. I think your foot was too far down.” Jones logs the exercise as ‘five reps question mark’.
Nautilus “Spinning” Machine (Weighted Chin-ups) – 120lbs
Jones introduces a wager to Coe, “How about 10 reps for $10 a rep? If it’s 10 no bet, if it’s below 10 you pay me, and if it’s over 10 I pay you? Here we are committing a felony in the state of Florida and we’re illegally gambling on videotape.” Coe hits nearly nine, and curses saying he owes Jones money after previously hitting eight.
Decline Press – 190lbs
Coe manages a set of seven reps. “Six months from today, you’re going to be doing 11 or 12 reps with 240 on that chin, by which time you ought to be able to do five or six reps one-arm chin with either arm,” says Jones.
Reverse Fly – 120lbs
Coe grinds out 10 reps, visibly struggling, but Jones isn’t fully convinced, saying, “I’m gonna give you 10 and fault you on the form, so we’ll stay with that. I think you really got nine good ones.”
Decline Fly – 120lbs
Coe performs an entire set, but Jones corrects the setup and asks him to do another one. With his back placed further back on the seat, he can be under the axis of rotation according to Jones.
Rotary Torso – 150lbs
Similar to performing a cable woodchop, the machine works the obliques and core muscles. The machine is unlikely to be found in a 2025 budget gym, but it is likely highly effective nonetheless. Jones nods at Coe’s improvement, saying, “You are really getting strong on this thing. Of course, that’s an area of your body you probably never worked before in your life, so not surprising really.” Coe does 15-16 reps per side.
Coe goes to 160lbs for lateral raises, squeezing out 10 reps. The final two don’t pass Jones’s inspection, “You got 10, but I’m gonna fault you on the form on the last two there, so we’ll stay with that.”
Finishing with shrugs at 65lbs, Coe pushes from 13 to 15 reps, pausing at the top as instructed. ‘Give me a good pause at the top, OK?,’ says Jones. ‘I noticed that you’re still gripping with your hands – it’s instinctive to do that, but it’s not necessary and it doesn’t help; it just runs your blood pressure up.”
Final Review
Jones wraps up the session, stoic in nature, and says “You’re not doing bad at all, you’re up on just about everything. We’ll raise the calf raises a little, problem on the leg curl area, rotary torso, you’re up again, shrug you’re up – most of the other things you’ve increased your reps, so you’ve come along fine.”
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