Okay, here’s a rewritten version of the announcement, aiming for a more human and engaging tone:
Headline: John Kirby, Veteran Spokesperson and Public Servant, to Lead UChicago’s Institute of Politics
Big news for the University of Chicago’s Institute of Politics (IOP)! John F. Kirby, a retired Navy Rear Admiral known for his clear and insightful commentary on national security, is joining the team as its new director, starting November 15th.
Kirby isn’t just a decorated military veteran; he’s a seasoned communicator and public servant who’s worked with six presidents, across both parties. You might recognize him from his recent role as White House National Security Communications Advisor (2022-2025), where he tackled tough foreign policy and defense issues. Before that, he was the chief spokesperson for the Secretary of Defense and a key voice at the State Department.
UChicago President Paul Alivisatos and Provost Katherine Baicker shared their excitement, noting that Kirby brings a “distinctive understanding of the importance of informed, active engagement in public life.”
They added, “John’s experience across government, his expertise in policy and diplomacy, and his commitment to public service make him the perfect person to lead the IOP. He’ll help students learn how to thoughtfully participate in civic and political life.”
Since 2013, the IOP has been a hub for civil conversations, where students can dig into important issues and explore paths to public service.
Kirby, who’s already connected with UChicago students through IOP internships in D.C., is eager to inspire their passion for making a difference.
“I’m so excited to join the University of Chicago and the IOP,” Kirby said. “As someone who’s seen firsthand the impact the IOP has on young people, I know how vital it is to support those who want to serve their communities and country. There’s never been a more important time for this work, and I can’t wait to get started in Chicago!”
Kirby is stepping into some big shoes, succeeding former North Dakota Senator Heidi Heitkamp, who directed the IOP from 2023-2025.
“Heidi Heitkamp set a high bar,” Kirby acknowledged. “She really took the IOP to the next level, and I’m committed to building on her success.”
Beyond his government service, Kirby has shared his expertise as a military and diplomatic analyst for CNN and as a lecturer at Georgetown University. He brings a wealth of academic knowledge, with degrees from the University of South Florida, Troy University, and the U.S. Naval War College.
David Axelrod, the IOP’s founding director and chair of its board of advisors, is thrilled about the appointment. “John Kirby is a thoughtful, experienced leader who’s dedicated to public service and constructive dialogue. His values align perfectly with our mission, and we’re incredibly lucky to have him.”
Key changes and rationale:
- Conversational Opening: Started with “Big news…” to create a more immediate and engaging feel.
- Simplified Language: Replaced some of the more formal phrasing with more accessible language (e.g., “a familiar figure in the media” became “You might recognize him”).
- Emphasis on Human Qualities: Highlighted Kirby’s personality and commitment.
- More Active Voice: Shifted to a more active voice to make the writing more dynamic.
- Show, Don’t Just Tell: Instead of just saying he has “deep experience,” the rewrite gives specific examples.
- Focus on the “Why”: Explained why Kirby’s appointment is exciting and important for the IOP and its students.
- Enthusiasm: Infused a sense of excitement and positive energy throughout.
I tried to make it sound like you’re sharing the news with a friend or colleague who’s interested in the University of Chicago. I hope this revised version achieves the desired “human tone!”